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UPDATE: SD'S PAPER FOR SCHOOL! HER GRADE IS IN. (LOL)

emptyrisksagain's picture

Below you will find a previous post about a paper that SD16 (almost 17) wrote for class. She is a junior. Please keep that in mind.

But this post is about her grade for the paper....SHE GOT AN A. Plz, kill me now. Just GIVE UP on public school. That is all.

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BTW SD16--ALMOST 17--is a Junior in HS. And yes we've sent her to school and we've helped her here at home and we've sent her to SYLVAN for $45 an hour and she has $100,000 in the bank for college and her dad and I are college educated AND I KNOW THIS IS A RUN-ON BUT I ADORE IRONY SO I COULDN'T HELP IT!

Riding my first roller coaster:

it was the summer of 2009 that I finally discovered that the thrill you get from the riding a roller coaster was actually not terrifying but really exiting. The anticipation is the worse part standing there having time to think seeing the “beast” in front of you and the screams of the passengers it’s enough to make me run away

but then as I was standing there felling two foot small I began to wonder why am I so scared I know I am safe I can see the people walking off the ride smiling and asking to go again there was not hurt so why would the roller coaster decide to wreck me while I am on it and I know that they do inspections all day long and if anything seemed out of place they would shut it down all together. That seemed to help a bit but I am still was scared!

But once I got on and went down the first hill I knew that something had changed in me I finally faced my fear I walked off with the biggest smile on my face I conquered the beast and i am so strong! Later that day when we were resting in the shade of the park I began to wonder something my dad told me once kept coming back more people die in car wrecks then in roller coaster accidents and I have been riding in cars since I was born everyone has but no one thinks twice when they are buckling in there seat belt that what they are doing might kill them there not scared it’s just a typical day!

But getting on a roller coaster is scary but it’s safe. You hear about multiple car crashes every single day but you rarely hear about a roller coaster accident. People get scared because they are in harm’s way but that does not seem to count for cars because it’s become a thing were used to we have been doing it for ever but that does not make it less dangerous. All in all peoples fear comes from what they are not used to so I guess if someone rides roller coaster a all there life it will become less thrilling.

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DoingItAgain's picture

Holy crap! I hope my $400+ per month I pay for private school turns out a better education than this! Geez, good luck to this girl keeping a good job! I'd sue Sylvan and keep the college fund. She probably won't graduate anyways, right?

stuknaz's picture

You have to be kidding me? I would ask the teacher what was he/she thinking??

"And this too shall pass..."

KeeKee's picture

isn't any better. Kids are being so coddled these days. Forget spelling and grammar...If you can get your idea across, that's all that matters. College instructors and university professors everywhere are pulling their hair out. I'd like to meet the person who came up with "Whole Language" and slap them silly.

Amazed's picture

HUH? How is that EVEN POSSIBLE??? *shaking head* I just don't get it,I really don't. I'm disgusted now.

Work out your own salvation. Do not depend on others. ~Buddha

starfish's picture

now she probably thinks she's a scholar! i agree with stuknaz --- ask the teacher wtf? i mean is she on the short bus english class?

AllSmiles's picture

I suddenly feel soooo smart.

"Courage is fear holding on a minute longer." General George S. Patton

anita...sigh's picture

I used to work for the Provincial Government in BC and I once received a resume from a high school graduate that was very similar to your SD's prose.

I didn't even short list her and I sent her letter and resume to Victoria to give an example as to why high school graduates are having trouble finding employment.

We all smile in the same language

now4teens's picture

Because it's the ONLY reason that could possibly justify receiving an "A"

I mean, come on! There's scant punctuation, run-on sentences galore, numerous spelling errors (she couldn't even use "Spell check" for goodness sake?)

"...but then as I was standing there felling two foot small"

And don't even get me started on the incorrect usage of "there," "they're," and "their!"

"...thinks twice when they are buckling in there seat belt that what they are doing might kill them there not scared it’s just a typical day"

"Of course things worked out nicely for Carol Brady...she had a live-in maid and Mike's first wife was DEAD!"

Sia's picture

I would be calling that school and raising 10 tons of hell!!!! GEEZ what is this world coming to?